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Adventure Time: The Finnceline Story, Chapter 9

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Chapter 9: Scar Tissue

-Third-person POV-
Flame Prince was living in a secluded cave, which was hidden to all but himself. He had been staying in a house that he had built in the cave, he went inside and sat down at the card table he used for a dining table, he put some charcoal briquettes on a plate and took his mask off so that he could eat, and quickly put it back on again when he was finished. He looked out the cave mouth, admiring the beautiful scenery. He closed his eyes and thought about his sister, he remembered when they played together, 'tag you're it' he smiled and then tears fell from his eyes, pooling in his goggles.  He hated this mask, but ever since he became infected with an incurable disease, he needed to wear it, as it kept the infection at bay. He already had coughed up blood and had a hard time breathing earlier, when he kept it off for too long. He missed his sister so much, and hated that the human she had been with was still alive, he soon came to the decision that he shouldn't let his sister's death cloud his judgement, but he still wanted to kill Finn. Flame Prince had always disliked the human, if he had a say in who his sister could be with, he would've chosen someone more physically capable of being with her. Flame Prince began to plot on how he would kill Finn, first, he thought about stabbing him in the back with a dagger, then he decided to fight him, and after many different revisions, he decided to go with his second plan. He grabbed his sword, sheathed it, and prepared to leave "soon, this will all be over..." said Flame Prince, and he left his cave.

Meanwhile, Marceline was scavenging through a landfill for different materials for a 'project' that she was working on.
Chapter 9 of my finnceline fanfiction

sorry for the shortness of this chapter, the next one wil be longer

I go into Flame Prince's POV for the first time in this fic

Marcie's planning something ;)

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Tommyp573's avatar
Anger, fighting, infection, and a grudge against Finn. Flame prince shows a lot of guts. Respect yet hatred. Flame prince you moron. Great story.