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Adventure Time: The Finnceline Story, Chapter 8

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Chapter 8: My Immortal

-Marceline's POV-
Finn and I were heading back to my house, after we arrived, we had breakfast and went upstairs to the room we shared together. When we were both in the room together, I looked him in the eyes, "Finn, can I show you something?". He shrugged and said "sure, why do you ask?", I moved over to the corner of the room towards a large object concealed by a red, quilted blanket and gestured towards the object "this is why..." I said, and pulled the blanket away. Underneath the blanket, was a black, shining grand piano, Finn looked at it in awe "wow...where did you get this?" he asked me, I kept my eyes on the beautiful instrument, "it used to be my mother's before she passed away, then my dad held onto it and recently gave it to me after we visited him" I said. I opened the lid, showing the intricate mechanical parts, and then opened the smaller lid that covered the keys. They were still as crisp and un-scuffed as they were 900+ years ago, I sat down on the bench and put my hand on the piano "my mother used to play this everyday, she even taught me a song, she had such a beautiful voice" I said, I remembered when my father would come home to the most beautiful music he had ever heard, and my mother would be playing this piano. I ran my fingers across the keys, and remembered the first time my mother taught me how to play the piano, we were both having so much fun together. "Do you know any songs?" asked Finn, I looked at him, and then down at the keys, "there is one...my mother taught it to me before the Mushroom War...before she died...but it's too sad to play" I said. "Marceline..." said Finn, his hand was on my upper back, he continued "that doesn't matter, I won't judge you about it, go ahead...", "thank you Finn" I said, some tears forming in my eyes. I wiped the tears away and turned to face the piano keys "alright...here goes nothing..." I said, I placed my hands on the keys, and started playing, my mother's angelic voice rang from my lips as I played.

"I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone"

"These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase"

My pain and suffering poured out through these lyrics, all the friends and family I've had in my existence, were gone. It felt like I've had to spend an eternity without them.

"When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me"

Memories of my mother appeared in my mind, we had so many good times together.

"You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me"

Years of agony resonated though my voice. Years of feeling guilty, and of my desperate searching for finding somebody to love.

"These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

Many of my relationships had gone either good or bad, sometimes the guy I was with would die before I could save them, or they would do something so distasteful (even for myself), which would cause me to break up with them.

"When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me"

"I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along"

Tears were welling up in my eyes.

My curse, my immortality, it made sure that loved ones would whither and die, while my body remained frozen in time.

"When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me"

I finished, and began sobbing, Finn held me and I cried into his shoulder, he petted my head, "it's okay Marceline, it's okay, I'm here for you" said Finn. "I know what it's like to lose people you love, but they're always with you, you're never alone". His pep-talk lifted my spirits enough to get over my problems. "Thank You Finn, you're the only one who understands me that way" I said, Finn gave me a big smile "hey, isn't that what I'm here for?" he asked, and we both laughed. We decided to have a jam session to pass the time until we needed to go to sleep, we hadn't done a jam session in years. I had previously taught Finn how to play different types of guitars and instruments, but he preferred using a bass, so as we played, I got thinking of a gift for him.
Chapter 8 of my finnceline fanfiction

this chapter is set entirely in Marcelines POV, she plays "My Immortal by Evanescence"

credit goes to Triangleeyebrows, he's the one who came up with [link] that I based this off of

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Bleachfan2014's avatar

I could always see Marceline playing that song, this is fantastic!!!!! :D